Sunday, June 02, 2013

Poem: The grouse and the pattern

Here is a cool grouse,
in a tree having fun

Here is a cool pattern,
partly lit by the sun

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  1. Keep up the rhymes and you'll have a children's book.

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    1. Maybe you could mention bun or run?

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  2. Not sure about that grouse having fun. Looks like he's pining for the fjords ...

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    1. Nope! He was wandering around so definitely not nailed to the perch.

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  3. 4 syllables come to mind.... William Wordsworth....Bam.

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    1. I suppose this is a compliment? lol, thanks!

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